Fantasy Writer

Alden
Burgess

Writing stories where the magic is easy. It's the people who are complicated.

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ExSpelled
Alden Burgess

Adult Urban Fantasy

Currently querying

ExSpelled

A disgraced wizard must team up with a band of magical misfits to solve a murder and save his father from an evil sorcerer.

Set in Northmere, a New England town where the only thing stronger than the magic is the coffee opinions, ExSpelled follows Lanford Grier, a young wizard who gets expelled from Merewood Institute of Magic after an unsanctioned training session goes wrong and the chosen one ends up dead. What follows is equal parts noir mystery, found family, and a magic system built around the seven senses.

~98,000 words. The arc moves from feckless to purposeful, with a few very bad decisions along the way.

Adult Urban Fantasy ~98K Words Currently Querying

Comp titles: The Tainted Cup by Robert Jackson Bennett · The Expanse series

For agents

Full query package available on request. Manuscript complete. Get in touch →

About Alden

Alden Burgess writes adult urban fantasy. His debut novel, ExSpelled, takes place in Northmere, a town that will feel familiar to anyone who's ever grabbed a coffee where they take their art as seriously as their magic.

He came to fiction through film. After studying at Maine Media College and spending years in production, he carried the storyteller's instincts with him when he made the shift to the page — a respect for structure, a weakness for a well-timed joke, and the conviction that even magic systems need rules.

Alden is a board member of the Speculative Fiction Writers Association, where he writes the craft column The Engine Room. He lives in Northampton, Massachusetts with his wife, two kids, and Taco Tuesday, a yellow lab who takes his hiking schedule very seriously.

ExSpelled is currently with beta readers.

Alden Burgess

The Engine Room

Welcome to the Engine Room, where craft can be learned, adjusted, and repaired. Out of sight of the passengers, but essential to keep the story moving forward.

ETA: Emotion, Thought, Action

When a big moment hits your character, a revelation, a confrontation, a loss, resist the urge to just describe what happens. Run it through ETA.

E Emotion
T Thought
A Action

First, let the character feel it: the gut-punch, the wash of heat, the sudden stillness. Then let them process it: even a half-second of internal reaction grounds us in their perspective. Then let them act.

Skipping steps makes your biggest moments feel thin. ETA won't fix every scene, but if a draft moment isn't landing, check which letter you dropped.

More dispatches from the Engine Room on the way. Browse all posts →

Contact & Updates

For agents & publishers

Query materials, manuscript requests, and professional correspondence — I'm currently actively querying and would love to hear from you.

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Occasional updates on ExSpelled, new Engine Room columns, and whatever else is worth saying. No noise.